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On Losing My Virginity by *wonderlustqueen:iconwonderlustqueen:



I never believed
in the innocence
buried somewhere
in my flesh;
it was a myth
twirled by nuns
or my mother.

And yet, as
I take yours
I cry as if
somewhere
in my heart
there is
a hymen
tearing.
©2009-2010 *wonderlustqueen
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:iconejectionletter:
beautiful. very very beautiful.
:iconwonderlustqueen:
thanks for the beautiful comment + :+fav:

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oh, I didn't realise that you wrote poetry
I didn't realise you wrote such bloody awful poetry, Mr Shankly
:iconlosingmyfaith:
great job, i really like this piece.

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
:iconiampoetry:
Nice piece, reminds me of my younger years.

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Poetry is truly boundless. It is my passion, I am the canvas.
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my poetry, lemon
both bitter and tart
you decide the taste of my art

©iampoetry
:iconbellaend:
well done, i really like this :]

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:jackdirt:
:iconwonderlustqueen:
thank you

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oh, I didn't realise that you wrote poetry
I didn't realise you wrote such bloody awful poetry, Mr Shankly
:iconwonderlustqueen:
thanks

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oh, I didn't realise that you wrote poetry
I didn't realise you wrote such bloody awful poetry, Mr Shankly
:iconwonderlustqueen:
thanks

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oh, I didn't realise that you wrote poetry
I didn't realise you wrote such bloody awful poetry, Mr Shankly

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