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how the starfish came to be by *wonderlustqueen:iconwonderlustqueen:



i was a star once, you see
never had much of a light
(oh, but i did try, my dear)





watched you sail while
everyone else dreamed





and that's when i cut off my ropes
to be a fish in the sea
©2009-2010 *wonderlustqueen
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:iconthroughangelseyes7:
this is so very brilliant in its shortness.

i love it!
:heart:

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I have a pocket sun boy
I\'m everything that burns in you...
:iconr-mitchell:
yay, this is a great story and beautifully told :)
:iconhelzcullen:
Beautifully mindblowing. I love the rhyme and the spacing and the words - oh, the words! - and I am envious of the way your mind works.

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♥?
:iconbeigegray:
Your work is so abstract, I feel like I have to fave so that I can review it and review it whenever possible. It's the type of work that just sticks. :+favlove:

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And I asked myself about the present: how wide it was, how deep it was, how much was mine to keep.
--Vonnegut
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:heart:!

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oh, I didn't realise that you wrote poetry
I didn't realise you wrote such bloody awful poetry, Mr Shankly
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ohmyohmyohmyohmyohmyohmy

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the only thing lady luck gave me was an STI and a death wish.
:iconwonderlustqueen:
:)

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oh, I didn't realise that you wrote poetry
I didn't realise you wrote such bloody awful poetry, Mr Shankly
:iconihaveastory:
Neat idea/concept. Very clever indeed.

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"the body is the vehicle, bound by time.
the mind is the mechanics, bound by logic.
the soul is the part from the whole attempting to be an individual.
and the spirit is what remains of the bond shared before there was time."

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